The good news is, I'm still working my way through the to-do list and have made a few more of the planned changes to my story. But at this point I'm not prepared to share another sample, as the changes are too minor to show off. In the grand scheme of the story, they definitely make a difference. But in the context of a single scene, the changes are a bit subtle and I think they wouldn't make much impact if read separately from the story as a whole.
Not much else to say right now. I haven't spent as much time working on the story as I would like, but at the same time I am making progress, so I guess that's something. And it seems like I'm always saying the same thing: wish I could spend more time writing, yada yada. I think if I really wanted to, I could spend more time writing and less time doing other things... it's all about priorities really. The current priority of the story is such that I give it a few hours a week, usually Sunday mornings, and that's sufficient to keep making progress, albeit slowly. And I am mostly satisfied with that, even if I often claim otherwise.
Hope y'all have a great day and week! Today is shaping up to be a beautiful one in Denver, and I'll be going out for a run in a little while, to enjoy the fresh air and sunshine.