I'm still offering to email out the first 3 chapters of the Balfrith story, if anyone is interested. I did get a bunch of responses, but based on the web traffic history that I'm seeing, I know there are more of you out there. Just send me an email at thurianknight at gmail dot com. Please use the subject [Balfrith sample].
The current state of editing puts me at chapter eight, and the Geekwif at chapter five. Moving at about 3 chapters per week, we should be done in around 7 or 8 weeks. Still no plot holes or other big problems found, although we have done several nice improvements to individual scenes.