The geekwif's read-through and commentary proceeds apace. She has given me feedback on chapters one and two so far, with minor suggestions and corrections that I have incorporated into the current draft of the story (for those who are counting, this round of editing will be the third draft).
The good news is that she hasn't found any glaring plot holes or major story issues so far. Of course we're only through chapter two at this point, and there are twenty-three chapters in the current draft. So there is still plenty of time and space to find all sorts of plot holes and problems. But I am optimistic, and think that it's not very likely she'll find any major issues.
The bad news is that... there really isn't any bad news. So I suppose that's just more good news. Hey!